For Someone
Posted by Absar | Posted in Life And Love, Poetry | Posted on 25-05-2008
Tags: life, Love, Poetry
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What I felt, I wrote for you,
And not a word that bled!
The scathe on my heart,
Dried with an impotent weep,
Stretched across an eon!
But I know now,
What I wrote for you,
Was just ink on paper;
Given beauty only with the spreading of colors!
For someone.



For once your poetry is good.
You should turn it into a song. But not the ones which are coming out these days. Make it something like ‘Wish you were here’.
And you must be in love. Yikes
Ah han .. so in love??
Continuing what safiullah has to say up …
Its actually good … a bit Shakespearean like
but GOOD!
ohoo:P
Kon hai woh someone?:P
From what I know about you, this must either be for your chick-flick friend or your iMac.
Allah khair karey !
Good poem.
“…deewaron sey sir takrao gey jub ishq tumhein ho jayega”
@Everyone:
Thank you everyone!
for everything right
You’ve got brains to come up with such stuff
Awesome-ish!!
@Asma: Lol! Nahi, not for everything – kyunke most of the time you guys are just mean!
@D.M: Uh, I guess…
love made you a poet!
Absar mian, boht khoob!
mujha tu wo gana yaad agayaa: May Shayer tu nahiiiii magar aye haseeen jab sa dekha.. meyne mujh ko tujh ko shayriiiiiiii agayee….
waisa ab dil k mamlat ka kia haal hain?